Transcript: Sammie’s report notes Q3
Based on this information, which of these sentences would be most appropriate in the report?
a) The survey revealed that high school students in the region are interested in a range of industries, with economics, engineering, and healthcare being the most popular.
b) The survey revealed that among 361 students in the region, enrolled in year seven to ten, there is interest in a range of industries. Economics was selected 118 times, engineering was selected 133 times, and healthcare was selected 138 times.
Feedback:
If you selected A:
Yes. This sentence offers the required information.
If you selected B:
Sammie has mentioned that the readers don’t need all the details. Stating that the three areas were the most popular is sufficient and keeps the report concise.
